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Undiscovered Meaning by ~Aysel786:iconAysel786:



Death Prevails
Sudden Revelations unfold
Answers you've been searching for
Questions you never knew you had
A New Light pours through,
into your soul
potent and gentle
What never made sense, Now Does.
Truth faithfully comes to you.
Finally the Moment has come...
No.
Death Shows us Nothing.
A Cruel Joke
You Never Discover.
©2005-2009 ~Aysel786
:iconaysel786:

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:iconwhitestone:
That's a big question, whats after the death... we will never know...
Brava :hug:
:iconaysel786:
No, non lo sapremo mai...Grazie!

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~ Elisa Anaïs
:icondissimilitude:
Eek- just when I thought it'd have a happy ending. Thought provoking..nice work
:iconaysel786:
That was the effect I was trying to evoke, a sudden turn of matters, the ending's not what the reader might think it is, forcing you to reflect back on things, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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~ Elisa Anaïs
:icondissimilitude:
Well then you've obviously succeded. No problem!
:iconcubemb:
i suck at analysing why i like poems, so ill just say that its beautiful.

:salute: - myles

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How about you just take your pint and go sit the f**k down.
:iconaysel786:
And sometimes analysis is really unnecessary, not everyone needs it, so I'll just tell you that I am extremely pleased that you think it's beautiful. Really, thank you

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~ Elisa Anaïs
:iconsemperverita:
An interesting topic you chose to write about, although you did it very well. The shortness of it is comparable to how suddenly death can surprise someone, only to then reveal that it doesn't reveal to its victim(s) the secret of life or what happens at death. Excellently pondered and written.

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Anyone can fly, they just have to miss the ground at the right moment...

Daily intake is the key - unlock your soul.


*Philippians 4:13*
:iconaysel786:
It's a topic I often think about, how I think I have meaning in this life, but that at times, it seems like it's just something I say to myself to keep on going with dignity...You know, I hadn't thought of how the brevity of the poem is just as "how suddenly death can surprise someone", thanks for pointing it out.
Thank you for reading and for the lovely compliments. Glad you enjoyed it!

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~ Elisa Anaïs

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